Deep. Moisturizing. #sol18
March 16, 2018
deep moisturizing.
deep conditioning.
deep worries.
Lion’s share.
shareholders.
Shared worries.
Review moments.
Renew hope.
Release worries.
So much poetry in our slicing community inspiring us all. Today I’m considering Alice Nine’s pitchforks in a very lean way. I’m also considering Claire Landrigan’s post about worry.
This is Day 16 of 31 of the 31 day Slice of Life Story Challenge. Be inspired at Two Writing Teachers.
Thirty-One Educators Connecting Students and Books
Writing and thinking about teaching while White.
Observations about myself and others
The Life of An Acreage Farmer in Iowa
Authentic Discussion About Marriage, Motherhood, and Career
A journey of writing... my teaching life, my family life, and my journey through life.
Be Who You are
International teacher & Mom to a teen and tween
Writing to learn
to making big changes
My thoughts on books, education and life.
Teacher/Student writing, reading, learning and sharing
Explore ideas worth spreading
Yes, some slices we read are so inspiring, so memorable. The repetition in your poem works beautifully.
Now I’m worried!! Your craft worked .. . although I was feeling hopeful by the last stanza. Worry is a tough emotion for sure. Hang in there.
Clare
I love your first stanza – moisturizing, conditioning, worries. I loved how effectively they created an image in my mind. I love the leanness of this poem and how by the end the tone has changed. And l love the picture you chose for it. Thanks for all of it!
Love your poem. Inspirations can lead to wonderful places.
So good. Amazing how even with brevity, you accomplished a major shift in tone. After I read the entire poem, I read just the last line in each stanza; together they are the challenge, like inhaling and exhaling deeply three times. And thanks for the mention; I’m honored.
Pitchforks, especially in the condensed form you created, sound like wordplay that I can get behind!
You are the master. 🙏🏻
Nice!