Deep. Moisturizing #sol18

Deep. Moisturizing. #sol18

March 16, 2018




deep moisturizing.

deep conditioning.

deep worries.


Lion’s share.


Shared worries.


Review moments.

Renew hope.

Release worries.


So much poetry in our slicing community inspiring us all. Today I’m considering Alice Nine’s pitchforks in a very lean way. I’m also considering Claire Landrigan’s post about worry.



This is Day 16 of 31 of the 31 day Slice of Life Story Challenge.  Be inspired at Two Writing Teachers.



8 thoughts on “Deep. Moisturizing #sol18

  1. Now I’m worried!! Your craft worked .. . although I was feeling hopeful by the last stanza. Worry is a tough emotion for sure. Hang in there.

  2. I love your first stanza – moisturizing, conditioning, worries. I loved how effectively they created an image in my mind. I love the leanness of this poem and how by the end the tone has changed. And l love the picture you chose for it. Thanks for all of it!

  3. So good. Amazing how even with brevity, you accomplished a major shift in tone. After I read the entire poem, I read just the last line in each stanza; together they are the challenge, like inhaling and exhaling deeply three times. And thanks for the mention; I’m honored.

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